Thesis/Goal: I want my listeners to see the struggles, but most importantly the rewards of being a big sister. I will work so that my TED Talk can appeal to those who share the same role as I do in being the oldest, to those who are the younger sibling to give them a sense of what it means to be the oldest, and also to those who don't have any siblings to show them what's it's like to have a brother or a sister.
For my TED Talk I want to incorporate definition, narration, and cause and effect into my personal experiences of being a big sister. I want to start out by defining what a big sister is in both a literal sense and a personal sense. By using a literal route I can have the listeners understand what a big sister is and by bringing in personal experience, I hope to grab their attention through both humor and seriousness through telling personal stories. I also want to include cause and effect in that the actions and decisions someone makes as an older sibling can and will have an effect on younger siblings.
For my TED Talk I want to incorporate definition, narration, and cause and effect into my personal experiences of being a big sister. I want to start out by defining what a big sister is in both a literal sense and a personal sense. By using a literal route I can have the listeners understand what a big sister is and by bringing in personal experience, I hope to grab their attention through both humor and seriousness through telling personal stories. I also want to include cause and effect in that the actions and decisions someone makes as an older sibling can and will have an effect on younger siblings.
HELP: So I don't know how to better word my thesis statement so it's more of a thesis statement rather than a goal. Or if it works fine as it is for a thesis statement? comments would be much appreciated :)
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